Talk:The State of South Dakota

This Oc needs some work, first of all her apperance. She would not have green hair, even if it's dyed. She repersents all of South Dakota and I don't think their are many people with green hair there. As fr what she wears, it makes no sense. Why would she wear clothes from the 19th century? Remember this person repersents the whole state meaning she would be wearing what most people wear there, so most likely a shirt and jeans or something. I do like how you put she is mistaken for her sister however. Now hen as for her bio, I'm sorry but it doens't seem right. I don't think it would make sense that she is insane, or chaotic or anything of the sort. Also she wouldn't go to a school, she is a state. She wouldn't have that, she'd be homeschooled or something to the extent and even if she was expelled the school board can only prevent her from going to school in that district and not in every single state of the US. Also why would she be shipped to Bremuada? It makes no sense, there is no history there. Nothing about her personality nor her bio make any sense at all. She doesn't seem to follow any sterotype that South Dakota has and you don't seem to put any history here. Aright so work on how she looks, acts, and her history. Make it all more accuate and make it make sense.