Talk:Valeria Kirkland (London)

This is a really good OC! Her hobbies are prettyh accurate, in fact, the only thing that is keeping her from being a Non-Mary Sue is her relationships. Hell-to-the-NO with the incest. Nope. Ain't gonna happen.

I like your traits in your OC which is accurate but in my opinion it's just getting onto the next level of Mary-sue. The relationship with England, the cities and countries to me are like father-daughter, father-son, etc. Just--- no, incest.

And what do you mean by 'yandere character'? Valeria is Latin and Hungarian name while Maria is Spanish. Mary-anne is fine and Henrietta is fine since it's a English-German name.

Also, why the heck is she fourteen? Are you trying to make her moe? (tsk tsk, 150cm aka 4'11).

Okay, enough of my ranting. I just think you need to work on her more.

MakeCandyNotWa (talk) 12:37, September 14, 2013 (UTC)MakeCandyNotWa

just so you know:

incest is illegal in England (the whole of UK, actually).

Valeria is not a commonly-used English (or British) name. A common name such as Amelia, Olivia, Sophia, Emily, etc. would be better.

Her outfit (in the profile picture) looks similar to an average victorian-age dress, which probably isnt the best choice for an outfit since londoners nowadays tend to wear more 'trendy' outfits. (from what i've seen when i went to london a couple of years ago)

London (as in the city itself) is older than England, and aph England is 23 years old, apprearance-wise, that is. Therefore i think your OC should be somewhere around the age of 25+.

But other than that, your OC is pretty good.

((i apologise for any gramatical/spelling errors in this. English is not my first language.))116.88.216.168 10:09, June 1, 2015 (UTC)