Talk:Berlin, Prussia/Germany

I have some critics to do.

Well, even if Mareike is a German/Frisian name, i will suggest you to give her a more common name or the name of an important woman from Berlin (only 958 people are called Mareike in the whole Germany) Like, I don't know, Alexandrine from Alexandrine of Prussia (but it's very rare) or  Katharina which is a very common name. For the name Isole I only know that is the Italian for Islands.

appareance: Grey hair with blonde streaks seems a bit unnatural  imho, and Hetercromia is rare and it doesn't make your eye red under any circumstances.

I don't want to touch the clothing, but, i think that with only a tank top you'll  probably freeze to death during Berlin winter.

Mentally illness: the biggest nope in the history of nope. I know a person with bipolar disorder and seriously, it isn't someting to joke around. Also  It's biologically impossible to have all those you've listed.

I hope that with the partner-in-crime reference for Sicily you don't mean the Mafia. I HOPE. And she's a city, she can't have human parents or kill them or being recluse in a prison.

That's all I have  to say for the moment. Sorry if you feel offended by what i've said, i've tried to be more objective possibily (and sorry for the English)

XxXCharonXxX

XxXCharonXxX (talk) 15:09, February 22, 2015 (UTC)