Talk:New York

Aright so, this isn't terrible however I wouldn't say it'sgreat. I would go more in depth with how she looks, like what she wears, her skin tone, whether her hair is straight, wavy or whatever. Try and pain a picture. As for her personality I don't really get much other then she like comic conventions and is a bit of prankster. Also one thing I'd like to point out is that it doesn't make much sense that she can see ghosts and mystical creatures. I would think becuase she is a state she wouldn't see them, like America can't see them. I think America's relationship with her is fine though with Canada I don't think they'd see one another a lot, after all Canada is a large country and would most likely live in his capital. As for Holland I believe it was Italy or France that had found her first ((my history is a bit rusty)) however  the Dutch did settle trading posts so I think you cna keep that they may have a slight relationship. I think it's good that you put her name as Emma and that her Birthday is he day that she became a state so that's good. I think it's fine that she's older then America as some States before being states were territories for different countries. So I would give this an okay stamp, still could use some work but isn't terrible!