User blog comment:MakeCandyNotWa/How to Make an Accurate Original Character!/@comment-10668912-20140831050707/@comment-14175999-20141026161143

If you don't mind, I could give you some advice, if you'd like (after all, I do run a review).

Well, first, I'd like to ask - why is your OC female? As stated, I feel this gender is quite overused. Unless you can think of a good reason (ex, historical influences, rights, population), I don't see why they should be.

You might want to talk about her sexuality, or at least whether or not she supports different sexualities. Same-sex marriage isn't allowed in South Carolina, so she would be straight - though South Carolina has been fighting for the right of same-sex marriage since 1996, so she would probably support other sexualities, though being straight herself.

You might want to explain why she wears the clothing she does, just to clarify.

Her personality and relations, as far as I see, are accurate, precise, and well-explained.

One more question - why did you decide on her name to be Marion?